Day 7: Beloved
You warm up my heart and my soul is overjoyed.
I feel like I am in a garden of sunflowers and it is snowing.
When you are near me, I want to frolic everywhere.
You are like a video game that lets me level up all the time.
You remind me of a seasoned tri-tip waiting for my teeth to sink in.
You are my beloved and I can not be with out you.
“I feel as if I’m in a garden of sunflowers” is a lovely, lovely line. “And it is snowing” seems contradictory — do you mean that you get the chills? Or, is it the thrills of contradictory emotions which love engenders in us all?
Either way, I loved it!
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When I am with the person to whom I love, I feel that I am walking with the sunflowers but I live in Denver where there is snow all around currently. I appreciate you wanting to understand the emotion in this poem, but sometimes my explanation will not my since. Thank you for reading this!
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Ah, thanks! I get it now. And it’s a great line, with or without the explanations. š
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Thanks, I am still learning how to write poetry but after this class, I will be able to drop a few poems here and there.
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š Take care, and happy blogging-poetry-writing!
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thanks
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“garden of sunflowers and it is snowing”
Wow… š I love sunflowers.
I will write a childhood memory about sunflower soon.
Would you like to check out my blog?
http://www.wordpress.officeboredomblog.com
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I would love to check your blog. Thanks for reading mine.
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https://officeboredomblog.wordpress.com/
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I tried to comment on your, “So You Think You Know Yourself”. I really enjoyed the comment. I, at times, think about who I am and it is hard to explain.
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Thank you for liking my post. I totally agree with you..thank God that there are many people who find this question difficult to answer iiiiiii
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True!
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Great words of love and passion.
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Thanks!
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