Day 6: Fallacy
If you go to the store and get a candy bar
I hope the trip isn’t long or you went to far.
I like Halloween because of the candy,
but I would rather have ice cream because it is handy.
On Easter, there are eggs and Jellybeans,
but skittles have all the colors and shimmery beams.
O chocolate, o chocolate, where art thou?
I would put you on my face and a lifted brow.
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I am an older woman inspired to not give up due to life struggles and to strive in everything I do to achieve my goals. I work from home with creating different art pieces. Helping the homeless community in Denver is important to me as well. I like being creative and posting on my blogging about experiences, new information, and lessons learned. I am motivated to put information on the web hoping it will help others.
I have two beautiful girls that are grown now and I hope they will be the women I know that is within them. I love technology and the outdoors. I am improving my health to live as long as possible. Life is worth living and living to the fullest.
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I like the flow because I love chocolates but it didn’t portray the fallacy.
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Thank you for your honesty, I thought it might be to much but I will work on anther.
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As a poem on its own,. its really good. Just a bit of tweaking will do to bring out the fallacy aspect. Well done 🙂
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I am not a poetry writer but I am trying to fine tune it. Thank you for the advise.
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You will definitely get the hang of it over time and find yourself waxing lyrics 🙂
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lol, I don’t know about that but I do want to write stories and a book/novel one day when I learn more of what the difference is.
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You will.
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